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rohit_rangari
rohit_rangariLv13yr
2021-06-23 12:57

The novel is good but more chapters to be upload....the novel starting chapter is interesting and comedy type ..the teenagers used to do dis

The sarcastic heart

ParimitaPBorkar
4.9
24 Chs

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ParimitaPBorkar
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Thank you..keep reading .

3yr
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Prashant_Borkar_2741
Prashant_Borkar_2741Lv1

The novel is good but more chapters to be upload....the novel starting chapter is interesting and comedy type ..the teenagers used to do dis

3yr

Madhukar_Ramteke
Madhukar_RamtekeLv1

The novel is looking very good... And hope so that becoming chapters of novel will also be nice.... Title also given is very nice .. keep it up and do your best

3yr
Kiran_Chavhan
Kiran_ChavhanLv1

All chapter story is very good I feel such a good life of teenagers. I support you should write many stroy novels another characters to feel another type of life.

3yr
ashish_gupta_8113
ashish_gupta_8113Lv1

I would definitely recommend this novel, because it keeps you reading without ever wanting to put the novel down. The novel is totally deserving. keep it up and continue writing.

3yr
Prashant_Borkar_2741
Prashant_Borkar_2741Lv1

Very nicely chapter's are written...story goes in well direction... Really novel is going in right direction and very good for teen agers...keep going on

3yr
sachin_dable
sachin_dableLv1

Novel is very gud.., best thing from my side is that example given "when any girl/boy fall in love the heart pumping like water handpump """""""..." Great going, keep it up.....!

3yr
Raksha1
Raksha1Lv12

The story's premise is good and the beginning was funny and lighthearted. It might get a bit confusing to read due to the lack of "" signaling the dialogue, and some mistakes in the English. But I believe all that can be corrected at the editing phase, so I won't use it as a criteria for evaluation. So far, the characters seemed human, with some relatable likes, dislikes and overall behavior. I hope the author will continue to work hard and make the story even better as she goes 🥰 Good luck!

3yr
Mayhem_Wolf
Mayhem_WolfLv1

Pretty good but must say needs some work on English A pretty determined author, but she does lack some skills, which with a bit of tutoring can be made good. The plot is pretty simple yet good. A bit more work on the personalities of characters would be good.

3yr
Ravi_nanhe
Ravi_nanheLv1

Easy in language....very easy to understand...like the story of novel.... explaining very nicely...waiting for another chapters to upload...keep writing in this way

3yr
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