Ok I have something to say. This author astonished me, time after do people correct him in his chapter comments and paragraph comments, he sees them, replies to them with a "I'll take it into consideration." or "Plothole, my bad." and then doesn't do fuck all about it 😂. Its like getting feedback of what to improve about your essay from your teacher and then handing the same essay in the next day with no changes. It's truly astonishing to see an author who hears the community, but doesn't listen. This book would be so much better if he were to fix his many mistakes, potholes and ridiculous plot armour. Peace out.
Raj_Shah_7152
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MÖGENMy review was harsh and I apologise, I can clearly see an improvement as the story continues. I won't say that all I said is wrong because I have reread, but I will say sorry for me speaking too soon. With your new editor and wonderful story writing, this is a very promising story and you've done good job at improving.
Raj_Shah_7152:its not that i dont work on it i have hired an editor who is working on it by the end of the month ch 1-60 will be corrected
Raj_Shah_7152:its not that i dont work on it i have hired an editor who is working on it by the end of the month ch 1-60 will be corrected