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SIENDONIA
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This book is good, in terms of storyline, it's just that there are too many uses of the words 'said', 'asked', 'replied', etc. without telling how they're do that conversation, it'll looks like they're just standing and talking each others. And.. Lack of visualization of characters, places, skills, etc. I hope you adjust it soon. That's all :3

GUARDIAN OF HEAVENHELL

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itsuki_kun1195
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ohh ya workin on it

SIENDONIA
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itsuki_kun1195:ohh ya workin on it