Review Detail of Venerable_Far in Cosmos System: Transmigration to the other world

On chapter 12 so far and if this is any indication of how the book will be after 100 I will drop, super fast-paced even compared to sign-in novels, mc breezes through stages in seconds. somehow mc showed up, saved a girl, has no conversation with her and after 2 chapters they consider each other husband and wife. That is the blandest romance I have ever read, I'm positive a 5th grader could write it better than that. My advice to the author, slow down and try a rewrite by adding more details and some more effort maybe instead of doing timeskips where he kills beasts for a week and goes up a major stage try showing 1 or 2 fights, that would be another 1-2 chapters and actually make the readers feel like the mc is working for his power