Review Detail of US_DreamerDon in Looking back

There is not a lot to say about this. I understand that the author wants to compete and is new, but this story was hard on me. For starters, the author himself reviewed the story giving himself top marks, but doesn't have a consistent updating schedule. Further, nothing draws me in the first chapter. The hook is simply not there and the only things that I know of the main female character is that she's going (or will go to) college and gets angry over someone else knowing their favorite song. Do not read. Not worth the time.