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It is a good novel . Eventhough it is a harem novel, the MC is not a Simp. He is arrogant yet cool, good looking and powerful. The novel has huge potential but is held back due to certain reasons1) Lack of adequate world building . The characters seem one dimensional and are not fleshed out.2) The villains are like cockroaches. The MC keeps letting them live . ( small spoiler eg : Elijah ( first small villain) is still alive even even in the latest chapter despite him trying to kill MC multiple times)3) Author can try adding some comedy elements to prevent novel from being too bland and generic

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Amon, The Legendary Overlord

Lruska

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Lruska
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Thank you for your review, I will take it into account

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How many chapters are you planning on writing for this story ?

Lruska:Thank you for your review, I will take it into account