So unfortunately this story isnt very good even with the fact that it has an okay concept its pretty bad mostly due to the writing the grammar is poor basically all the time and even within the first couple chaps you notice some moments where the author seemed to have forgotten facts from the show these small mistakes aren't really that bad the big thing that ruins the story is the writing it just feels stale and at some points very difficult to understand I honestly think my rating would improve dramatically if the author got someone to edit his work but until then I can only give a low rating because it at least to me is very hard to read without having to stop to contemplate what the author was trying to say
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