I like the premise. Introduction and worldbuilding take time which is honestly a plus in my book, and when it pays off, it makes for enjoyable moments. Writing and structure need a bit of improvement, there are a few off bits here and there. But overall, the story's nice. ( ̄︶ ̄)↗
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