Review Detail of Thutmose in Game Of Thrones: Tommen The Great

I truly enjoy this story. The pacing of the story itself is done very well. The plot moves along in each chapter quick enough that it doesn’t feel like a slog and slow enough that I don’t feel like things are a blur. The design of the main character comes across well and he feels truly integrated into the world of Westeros. I also enjoyed his interactions with the characters so far and hope to see how his relationship with his grandfather and mother has developed in the future. The way you introduce things is also well done it is not info dumped onto you and feels natural. The story is still new so I can’t really gauge update stability yet. Once more the story is published I’ll be able to really tell if it develops well overtime. All in all my eyes have been blessed (Grammatically) compared to what I have seen and read on this site. Keep it up 👍🏾. P.S. I do have some questions. Will there be more OC’s and the story is tagged harem so how big are you going or have you changed you mind on that? Another is will you have other POV’s to give it that ASOIAF feel or mainly focus on Tomman? Just a final question how will Dorne factor into this (Arianne Martell??)? Regardless if you answer, good luck 🍀 and I hope this helps you grow as a writer if that is your passion. -Hmm...this is one of my rare reviews