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Aiden_Dover
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Interesting concept but honestly bro your grammar and diction sucks. I can’t quite immerse myself in a story when the extent of your describing words are “sad, mad, and hurt”

A Titan in ONE PIECE

Yvan_Luarez

Liked it!

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Yvan_Luarez
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Thank you for the review. Im learning still in how to improve to a much higher skill of writing.😁