Review Detail of Champi_07 in Tamer of Cosmic Beasts

Hello. I was very cautious about if I should write a review or not but after reading some of it... I would like to say, that so far this has been very interesting, I have only read the first chapter, however I do plan to read more as I would like to see how your story develops I must say well done to the author I was very intrigued by your introduction but I am a little disappointed I would've liked to see more details on the beast, I feel as if this beast should have been described a little better, you are wanting to make this beast magnificent and fearful, but you didn't really get down to the imagination of what this beast should look like, I feel as if you missed out on some details. Now with Akash I feel you could've made his arrival more grand, you could've expressed his feelings more, you speed up his departure and arrival to quickly, I was disappointed as such a talented author as you missed such important details, I definitely would've enjoyed seeing this tragic yet mysterious picture come together as you see it, but other then that fantastic job I can't wait to read more!