I do like the mystery aspects of this story mixed with body-swapping. It makes for an interesting tale and a great premise executed very well. I think the storytelling is strong, the characters are likable, and the writing style goes well with your primary genre. Overall, I think you're a great writer and you wrote a story catered towards the right kind of audience. Great read!
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