Review Detail of NomsterWasHere in Duality or destiny?

Like others said, the opening bit was hard to follow because of the excessive use of pronouns. It wasn't until reaching Chapter 1 that I realized it was a stylistic choice to hide the identities of those involved! What started as confusion led to a yearning to uncover which characters the story opens with. Using a readers own stubbornness against them by challenging the form should be done in more ways, imo, not less. great work!