Review Detail of Princex4164 in The apocalypse of another world

Please stop writing in future tense, example "he would do this" that's future tense please stop, it should be 'he did this".... Bruh,........'...... . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . .