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Ok first off I want to start the review by saying that your writing style is amazing. Usually, I'll read books and the grammar is bad and the sentences are choppy, but this was really smooth and easy to read. The introduction to the book is amazing. It starts off with the reader thinking the world is normal, but then the author does a really good job of letting the reader know that this world is different. It isn't shoved in your face, and there's no long exposition explaining the world. I prefer it when the book eases you in. The descriptions are also really good. I can see the world your building, and I can feel the character's emotions. That brings me to my favorite part. The characters feel very real. The main character is unique, and she isn't just a one-dimensional female character. She has real depth, and the reader understands her completely. Overall, a really good read. I'll be waiting for future chapters!

First Term: Survival

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SandiBell
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Thanks so much for such a great review! I am working really hard to be a better writer and a lot of the smoothness is coming from my mentor who edited this for me. On my own, I have a problem with passive voice lol Thanks again!