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Sebuah cerita yang sangat menarik, saya sangat menantikan kelanjutan cerita ini. Sebenarnya cerita ini masih bisa diperas lebih banyak lagi dan dari beberapa chapter awal ada beberapa plot hole, akan lebih bagus kalau pengarang memperbaiki dan mengedit lagi kesalahan di bab-bab yang sudah diunggah.

Haikyuu: The Ace

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SwordGod007
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Can you please point out the mistakes and plot hole and write in English... I will try to correct them or improve them.....

Thiarha
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like who is the MC parent, and how was MC when he was a kid, when MC Got OP in volleyball, and I forgot the Other else.

SwordGod007:Can you please point out the mistakes and plot hole and write in English... I will try to correct them or improve them.....
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ohh that... I will write about it later like after they went to nationals... i always write the beginning but get lazy afterward... so I will explore his childhood and his relationship with his family members in bonus chapters...

Thiarha:like who is the MC parent, and how was MC when he was a kid, when MC Got OP in volleyball, and I forgot the Other else.