Review Detail of QueenRani6 in The Devil and the Huntsman

I would say you did a very good job with portraying the dark fantasy effectively. Most authors find it hard to do that including myself. You have the perfect grammar. Flawlessly written. Slow and steady pace. You have a nice way of describing a character. But what makes me really draw back from the book is the excessively long paragraphs and chapters but other than that it is good.