The author here was a great story ,some story developement and character developement , the only think that i didnt like was the dinamic between the female lead and the male lead, this is my opinion and is biased because i hate josei(i dont know what is called the reverse of this instead of being the female lead weak is the male lead) type of storys and this story feels like this, if i was the mc and had the chance to run away from the female lead i would run, i will continue reading because the author does a great job to make me entretained through the story, but i expect some developement from the male lead.
DameButterfly
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MÖGENEveryone has their own tastes which I always respect. Is MC weak at the start and sheltered? Yes but they do grow moving forward. But to be entirely honest- my book is also a bit of a train wreck as well. I'm not the most organized of authors. But again, I believe readers should read only what fulfills their interests
Crimson_King:I was slightly interested in the story but honestly after reading all the reviews and comments i wont be giving this story a shot. I can just tell im going to hate the male lEad and if the male lead is bad then the whole story is just ruined for me.
Thank you so much. Honestly, I appreciate honest reviews such as this and also that you're willing to continue to read to see how it turns out❤ MC and FL will both be going through character development. It may be a bit slow at first, but it'll pick up towards the end of this volume and more so in the second novel and forward.
I'm not sure exactly what you're asking? Can you give me a better example of what you mean so I can give a hopefully proper or good answer to your question?
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I mean will this story be drawn out like many other romance type novels like milking the main topic or drawing out character development to keep the story going until 200+ chapters later there is progress not even a solution or anything like that.
DameButterfly:I'm not sure exactly what you're asking? Can you give me a better example of what you mean so I can give a hopefully proper or good answer to your question?
Also having misunderstandings or any sort of problem that takes hundreds of chapters just to solve when it could be solved easily. basically will it be like many romance novels that milk the story to the point of ruining it and not having any progression
DameButterfly:I'm not sure exactly what you're asking? Can you give me a better example of what you mean so I can give a hopefully proper or good answer to your question?
Also having misunderstandings or any sort of problem that takes hundreds of chapters just to solve when it could be solved easily. basically will it be like many romance novels that milk the story to the point of ruining it and not having any progression
DameButterfly:I'm not sure exactly what you're asking? Can you give me a better example of what you mean so I can give a hopefully proper or good answer to your question?
No offense just really dont wanna read this only to find out both characters have almost no progression and problems never get solved and avoidable situations dont get avoided. while the Male character just stays this shy schoolboy that just gets teased by her (have seen similar to this before not a fun read) I personally would love to see it go both ways especially see the mafia princess blush and do those sort of things be pretty adorable and a change in character for her and have him be more dominant depending on situations (with others thats not her) a man basically or something
DameButterfly:I'm not sure exactly what you're asking? Can you give me a better example of what you mean so I can give a hopefully proper or good answer to your question?
I don't intend for it to be like that. Will the story be long, yes. But I intend for a lot to happen in it and progress to be rather normal paced. Romance is also surrounded by a number of other things occurring as well. Because it is the mafia it wouldn't be fun for the whole story to be just fluffy romance hence the action title.
Worn_out_by:Also having misunderstandings or any sort of problem that takes hundreds of chapters just to solve when it could be solved easily. basically will it be like many romance novels that milk the story to the point of ruining it and not having any progression
True love the action part curious to what kind of action will he be protected in the action or be active in it ina read to find out thanks for answering 😁
DameButterfly:I don't intend for it to be like that. Will the story be long, yes. But I intend for a lot to happen in it and progress to be rather normal paced. Romance is also surrounded by a number of other things occurring as well. Because it is the mafia it wouldn't be fun for the whole story to be just fluffy romance hence the action title.
No problem, I'm always happy to answer questions from readers. Can't say I always have good answers but I try. As for the action part- I don't want to give too much away but I'll just say that it goes both ways in terms of being a part of it and protected in it.
Worn_out_by:True love the action part curious to what kind of action will he be protected in the action or be active in it ina read to find out thanks for answering 😁
Also, sorry for second comment. If you wish to talk more about the story, I do have a discord server though it is rather small right now.
Worn_out_by:True love the action part curious to what kind of action will he be protected in the action or be active in it ina read to find out thanks for answering 😁
I was slightly interested in the story but honestly after reading all the reviews and comments i wont be giving this story a shot. I can just tell im going to hate the male lEad and if the male lead is bad then the whole story is just ruined for me.
DameButterfly:Thank you so much. Honestly, I appreciate honest reviews such as this and also that you're willing to continue to read to see how it turns out❤ MC and FL will both be going through character development. It may be a bit slow at first, but it'll pick up towards the end of this volume and more so in the second novel and forward.
The MC of My Three Wifes are Beautiful Vampires was also weak and sheltered. However he had a good opportunity and when power presented itself went for it and evolved himself to become better. One of my all time favoritd MCs This MC just doesnt seem interesting to read. Besides that the story itself did sound interesting.
DameButterfly:Everyone has their own tastes which I always respect. Is MC weak at the start and sheltered? Yes but they do grow moving forward. But to be entirely honest- my book is also a bit of a train wreck as well. I'm not the most organized of authors. But again, I believe readers should read only what fulfills their interests