This whole "FanFic" sucks. First of all, this isn't even a fanfic, it just has some ideas/inspiration from animes, besides that, this is original so please put it there. Secondly is Your MC, You are nerfing him to much by making him an idiot with him acting like he is 10. There is no character development, not even his powers develope much. You are given no information about the world he is in, and the Arthur doesn't dwell into it. Some things happened like when his mother suddenly knows about his power for absolutely no reason and is looked over by the Arthur. The Grammer sucks, you can read that in the synopsis. The only good thing about this "fanfic" is the updates as this is a new "fanfic" it updates often. TLDR: The idea is good its just that the Arthur written it poorly, he nerfs his MC really hard by making him dumb and you don't know much about the world. I rate this a 2/10 don't waste your time on this.

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The story have a nice plot.[img=recommend][img=recommend] It's also fun to read.......like the interaction with family members[img=recommend][img=recommend] Hope it will be a good story [img=update][img=update][img=update]

there not many conversations , the mc is so much busy with the upgrades that i feel that i am playing some mobile games with so many character and BS amount of upgrades , the background isn't explained and i can't imagine enough about the events for ex/ the place he lives in , the kingdoms , the names of the kingdoms , who are his siblings ? . his summons look so emotionless as if they were machines or slaves only to obey the master and no interaction at all .

this is a really great and unique idea i have seen but this is dragged down by the grammar the story development and how the world isnt explained much but i think one of the bigger problems is how you limit yourself by just using three animes for this novel it doesnt create much diversity

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por ahora bien espero que traigas mas capitulo seguido xn xn nxx nxxx nxnx nxnxnx nx xnxnx xxxx xxx x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x

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