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Item: THE AWAKENING
Rating: 5

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DaoistviT5RjAutor3yrDaoistviT5Rj

I suppose that rating your work yourself is a bad thing, however I hope that this action encourages other people to give me their opinions and ratings so that I can improve as a writer

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htsadv_dsadasdLv14htsadv_dsadasd

I think the synopsis can be more clear, it enters a new line when the sentence isn't done yet.

3yr

DaoistviT5RjAutorDaoistviT5Rj

Hello, thank you very much for your comment, I will ask for help with that, I do not speak English and it is likely that that is why it is not understood well, thank you for telling me the error.

htsadv_dsadasd:I think the synopsis can be more clear, it enters a new line when the sentence isn't done yet.

3yr