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Psan
PsanLv53yrPsan

Mandatory 5 stars for you to do a How NOT summon a demon lord FF. AS much as i like the anime, diablo lacks guts when dealing with women, any other normal man would have done them within a month since they wont be able to hold back anymore XD. Looking forward to legal loli demon lord kreb to the harem and his maid =P

How Not To Summon A Demon lord: THE ONE TRUE DEMON Lord

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PsanLv5Psan

K.... Here is the review, the grammar is MOSTLY fine, except for the complete and absolute lack of commas -> , <- This. It makes it very hard to read. A good example would be. HELP A THIEF!. which means to offer help TO a thief. HELP, A THIEF!, now this means that a person is asking help BECAUSE a thief stole from them. Same sentence, 2 completely different meanings. So dude.... PLS use commas.... at least try to study how to use commas, it takes less than a hour