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To be honest, I only read it as if it were giving me information, there is not much interaction, I only see that it dies and revives, dies, revives, helps isse, yuno comes and kills her, then goes to another world and helps nafumi and After you go through dxd, there is no interaction, it is very summarized, better concentrate on a small world and then you go to other stronger ones, like dbz, hischol dxd, because what I read I did not understand some things that I did, since you change a lot and deaths. - And with God not being able to know that he has the divinity or whatever of the time, that is impossible, for something is God, who looks at everything, that which says that he did not realize it is stupid, I would continue writing more, but I am sleepy .

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Alexthegeneral
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God not knowing is part of something bigger

jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv5jeanpierregerardo

work on your character is missing, since nothing is known, it is only known that he arrived, dies and continues the same, we do not know his parameters, what powers he has, many things are missing, something that readers will find it difficult to like the history.

Alexthegeneral
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He can adjust his stats to any number as long as it doesn't go past the limit of the race he is. the 'sacred gear' he has doesn't really do anything other than giving him a way to hide the existence of the system. about the power thing, I honestly just forgot to include his updated stats

jeanpierregerardo:work on your character is missing, since nothing is known, it is only known that he arrived, dies and continues the same, we do not know his parameters, what powers he has, many things are missing, something that readers will find it difficult to like the history.