Review Detail of MoonTree in KENSHIN HIMURA IN ONE PIECE WORLD WITH AN ANIME SYSTEM

well ... sorry author but your story is bad, your balance is bad, your writing is bad, just by reading the first chapters I already saw an almost constant "Deus ex machine" in the future of this story if you continue it, as a recommendation you should Go back to the drawing board and refine the plot a bit, along with the writing and also look to the future a bit, but, not that it matters, you can continue this story and improve through future chapters and then rewrite the first ones.