Review Detail of isharislynkia in The Black Pearl

The plot has intrigued me to keep reading. Besides on that fact, the strong female lead is sure as fiesty one and was no novice on her fighting skills. However, there are some few certain dialogue that didn't fit out of my expectations. Some are too hasty and cringey but still turned out fine. I would like you to fix some of that and also, the story flow was getting interestingm I'm looking forward for the next chapter ^^