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Kasrna
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I was on chapter six before i realized I should probably write the review now. first off, I enjoyed it. There were a few straying punctuation but could easily be fixed. I enjoyed the concept, and the characters are enjoyable to read. As I commented in the 1st chapter, a lot more details could be provided to add clarity. at some parts, it is confusing. The reader is only given the vibrancy of our FL's persona, and the other character's brightness. A lot more detail could make a big difference! I want to know the aura the school, the villain's choice of clothes, their home, their facial appearance ( for ex. the way you describe Min was very well and could be done a little further ). The reader is also given no context of the facial expressions when saying something despite the words they say are very clear, you shouldn't exactly expect the reader to do it all up. Overall, continue the great work! I hope you're not too offended, and I shall continue supporting this series! [img=update][img=recommend]

An Unscrupulous system, Teaching Scum to be Loyal Husbands

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Thank you so much!! And I'm sorry, usually I try to double check a chapter before uploading it but lately I've been in a rush trying to do a million things. With the descriptions part, you are abosuletly right. I was trying a different style but I ended up butchering it and not doing it properly. So that's the first thing I'll fix the second I have some time. Thank you so much for the review and your time. I really appreciate it. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]