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Lucien121
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honestly writting quility isnt the greatest it could be way better the way it starts off leaves much to be desired the story development is just terrible world back ground is is the worst uve seen in awhile charactor design is ok if it wasnt for idk had emotions i guess but they lacked depth idk about updating tho and the scenes and happening in the story leave much to be desired for they leave out alot of info and seems speed run the fight scenes are even worse but it has a good base line story but the quality is in need of massive improvement

I'm Almost the Chosen One

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Thank you for the feedback, I hope you enjoy the rest of my work as it get better and better.

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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.