Review Detail of Thaddus_Bone in Matched With The School Weirdo

Teen Romance stories aren't my thing but I was in the contest that this story was entered in and wanted to see how it held up. I can see the passion in the early chapters. And Venus felt like a good atempt at a Watson to the MC Sherlock. I think they needed a few things that they shared a intrest in (other than boys) for me to get invested in there dynamic. All in all a second draft needed.