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One complaint: I didn't see any mc char development....(Even thought mc bit 'Uncontrollable' for no reason after timeskip) Except for that everything is okay from my point..... It has a potential thought.

A Laid Back MC Traverses the Multiverse

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Yeah, I'm trying to fix that problem😅😅 That's why Im giving MC a little bit of problem with families or some shit like that😬 If you have any suggestions for improvements, please tell me... I'm all ears😁 Thank you for reading the fic😇😇