Review Detail of TheSleepingCow in I Will Be Popular After Being In A Coma

The idea is great but the story is all over the place. The author adds crossovers here and there like it was just thought up. I suggest you make plans for your stories before writing. We didn’t really know to much about the worlds, the powers and the explanation for the world mao was kinda wacky. The character development feels rushed and not thought out properly. Still the story is interesting and i liked it.