Review Detail of otaku_demon in Thomas Prest: A Simple Magician

hey author ignore all the people who decide to shit on your story for no reason because I like how you have gone about the first 38 chapters so far and how you haven't made the MC op by chapter five like the plethora of dxd fanfics I've read if you would like some ideas in how you mesh together the dxd world with the marvel univers I have a few 1st idea: you don't have to include all of marvel you can cut some stuff out if there is no conceivable way to integrate it into the world setting 2nd idea: the different races not being aware of powerfull people is stupid for example the sorcerer's in the marvel univers are powerful and operate on a completely different magic system than the dxd mages so to explain how they don't tend to involve themselves in conflicts(if that is the direction you decide to take them) peace treatys and if anyone breaks said peace (plot point?) have them act like there own powerful faction but take this with a grain of salt and the fact that they are only suggestion from a reader. and finally love the book so far and can't wait for more chapters in the future