Review Detail of abcdefgxyz123 in Brockwing Vale

Woah! I am currently reading chapter eight and so far good. The author is capable of creating lively characters and empathy towards the Mc. I thought Mc is simp, but yeah, you don't walk right after the born, and MC is also like that. The author gave pretty much space for character development and I think that's a necessary trait for a successful novel. The only thing I don't like was big paragraphs and sentences are too wordy. Thanks for a great novel.