Review Detail of SomeoneBad in Spirit Orbs : Chronicles of Ra'as

Overall, a fast-paced action story that unwinds rather quickly around the few key characters. The actions and combat are adequately portrayed, but the structure of paragraphs with intertwining dialogues and action could be a little more spaced out, giving each individual piece of content some room to breathe. The story transitions from scene to scene like a tv show, shifting in tone, story beats, atmosphere swiftly, though the exposition at times can be a little heavy. A story with a lot of potential, and with time, the rough edges could be trimmed off, revealing the true gem behind it.