Review Detail of SleepyKola in Belle Deep

I see I am second in giving a review here, makes me feel special😂🤣 So, This book is really good and great potential, the descriptions and plots are amazing, however there are a bit problem in building up tension and emotions, maybe you could add more details on feelings because your descriptions on scenes are already good. And.... sometimes the paragraph is a bit too long, breaking a long paragraph into 2-3 more will help bulding tension for readers. Anw, good job Author! Keep it up, the story is really amazing