Review Detail of John_sins1 in The White Swordsman Life

To be honest, the author just needs to do a few tweaks and this could be a great story. Just a little bit less edge for the MC, its a bit too much and he just seems weird not cool. Er also, please make him work on his strength like the other review said. Strength is crucial for swordsmen, a speed build is good, but without strength speed is useless. Also maybe you can ask someone to go over your chapters and check your grammar and english, just to improve it !