Can't really determine whether a story is good with just 2 chapters, I will leave it like that. Your could get a little more detailed in the world background. And somehow, the throne system is a little bit too forceful. Really similar concept to mine, just some lacking elements. (If you read mine, you know.) And also, grammar mistake.
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