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It's a pretty good read. The environment and story telling is done quite well and gives a good scope of the power Indra has. Despite a few errors in grammar, I was held by the plot you obviously wanted to tell. I hope to see you expand your field of writing.

The Legendary Tales of Indra

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Thank you, I'll be sure to work on my grammar! 👍