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GowthamYesG
GowthamYesGAuthor4yr
2020-09-17 01:27

Hello everyone, I'm supposed to use auxiliary volume for talking to all the readers about schedules, content etc. but I used it to include two chapters for setup of the story, so I'll be communicating here in the reviews. I also love reading your comments, so please do leave them on chapters and paragraphs. I'll respond as much as possible.

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GowthamYesG
GowthamYesGAuthor

In Chapter 16, I used Acupuncture Gu and introduced it as metal path gu used for strength support. I thought this was not used in RI before but it seems it was introduced in manga as a defensive gu. So I changed it to Upscale acupuncture Gu.

GowthamYesG
GowthamYesGAuthor

In Chapter 26, I wrote that Gu Guangzhi saw Xiong Jiao Lin through the window but in the next chapter I wrote that she was not present there. So I changed it that he saw a picture of her instead.

Dotencsure
DotencsureLv3

what will be the personality of mc? evil.....neutral.......good......

GowthamYesG
GowthamYesGAuthor

My idea for this fan fic was to create a righteous character that can face off against demon Fang Yuan. So MC is a good guy at heart.

Dotencsure:what will be the personality of mc? evil.....neutral.......good......
Dotencsure
DotencsureLv3

That will be hard.....lol...To make a character match Fangyuan's intelligence ...or surpass him....

GowthamYesG:My idea for this fan fic was to create a righteous character that can face off against demon Fang Yuan. So MC is a good guy at heart.
Paper_plane
Paper_planeLv4

is there romance/harem or anything like that ??

SHADOW_YAGAMI
SHADOW_YAGAMILv1

what about the expenditure of the gu worms? he uses a hell a lot of gu worms

GowthamYesG
GowthamYesGAuthor

I'm assuming you read up to the point he got Rank 2 Bamboo culm Gu. It takes care of expenditure of bamboo family gu worms which in turn feeds on fertilizer which are found abundantly in the wild. He also has a technique to make his gu dormant to avoid feeding them (at the risk of killing them after use). For other gu, he could've got materials from markets or caravans.

SHADOW_YAGAMI:what about the expenditure of the gu worms? he uses a hell a lot of gu worms
SHADOW_YAGAMI
SHADOW_YAGAMILv1

i hv read upto the latest chapter. i was asking because he has transformation path gu worms, and earth path gu worms and wind path gu worms due to which expenditure will be bigger. u wanna make a note of that. i liked the part where he sells other things + takes ransom.i also liked the fights. when i first read the story, i wasn't expecting much, tbh. but yr work is amazing! thanks.

GowthamYesG:I'm assuming you read up to the point he got Rank 2 Bamboo culm Gu. It takes care of expenditure of bamboo family gu worms which in turn feeds on fertilizer which are found abundantly in the wild. He also has a technique to make his gu dormant to avoid feeding them (at the risk of killing them after use). For other gu, he could've got materials from markets or caravans.
yourAncestor
yourAncestorLv5

I don't like many things about this novel, and with some of them I do not agree, but, it's actually not that bad, very much similar to those original backstories of righteous characters

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Rildec
RildecLv11

if you're expecting an op mc then look elsewhere. if you're expecting a competent mc then look elsewhere. if you're expecting wish fulfillment, badass mc, cunning mc, or even a non generic mc? look elsewhere. my first impressions of the main character have been lack luster so far. Bullied, then manipulated, ostracized, and again bullied and manipulated? It seems like authors writing a generic tragic character in which the world jut won't give him a break. Any bravado mc had from the beginning is literally beaten from him, leaving him armless, with low potential and almost resigned to his life. He clings to doing the right thing even when he is in some of the worst positions to be in. Maybe the author wants to draw emotion, a feeling of unwavering justice, but it comes off as a pathetic, last ditch effort to both end the suffering he has resigned himself and to do the right thing, adding some type of worth to his life. It looks like mc will be setup as tragic underappreciated martyr repeatedly until he has to contend with fang yuan in some kind of good vs evil battle. What attracted people to reading the original probably won't apply to this fanfic. If you like an unwavering fool in the face of a hopeless situation, striving for what he thinks is right then maybe this is for you. As the writing quality and grammar are a step above atleast 95% of what comes into webnovel. The author might say its from weak to strong but i don't think mc will ever truly be "strong" atleast compared to what author will make him face. Maybe weak to decent. TLDR Writing is good, grammar is good, mc is naive/foolish and gets himself into trouble a lot, while trouble also seems to find him.

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

the stories interesting, and compared to the other RF FF's this is better. The MC is someone with no knowledge about RI in RI...interesting, if done properly. But the thing about this bk is the MC is a retard, or heroic retard. -This MC SI's into a body, and the person was hated by everyone because of who he was, basically his status was beneath that of a slave. And MC knows this, and yet he tries to be hero. apparently MC has no common sense, this dude has no power, no help, barely any food, etc and he stands up to help a random, and the person he stands upto is a young master. And because of his stupidity he gets basically beat up. He later punches the young master, him, the village pariah punches someone with status ....MC isnt smart. Funny thing is apparently MC got beat up in his past life cause he tried to help when he himself could do barely anything. So, I suppose a smart and planning MC isnt a major focus. MC dost learn from past Another thing is that MC dosnt plan....he SI's into a world he knows nothing about and is in a hated body, one would expect him to collect info, plan, etc but he dosnt. would've been nice to see MC planning And something, I dont understand is how come he isnt a slave? his status was below a slave, why? everyone hates him because of his origin, so when he became orphaned, how come he wasnt forced to be come a slave? he could find a job even...him, a pariah of his society. So, I suppose to read this, u need to accept a stupid MC. other than these things which can easily be fixed later, its interesting

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