Review Detail of Geraldbridge in The Ultimate Guild

Item: The Ultimate Guild
Rating: 1.8

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GeraldbridgeLv103yrGeraldbridge

i stopped reading by the first chapter maybe go over it again and make it a little bit more interesting right from the start it's like the mc is just babbling some boring random stuff. and please be careful of not making a story to similar to already existing ones

The Ultimate Guild

Daoistlover95

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Daoistlover95AutorDaoistlover95

I spend every fast pass I get everyday to read books and maybe one comic I have found myself liking. My issue is that I kinda suck at introductions. As for longer sentences, ive got that covered by a long shot compared to all the other writers ive noticed. Feelings would be based on how I would feel so in the sense of being the MC, that's pretty close to how I would react to things.

3yr

Daoistlover95AutorDaoistlover95

And how would you improve it? Ive asked for help on FB with other writers but they didnt give me any tips on how to improve it.

3yr

GeraldbridgeLv10Geraldbridge

Best way to improve one's written skill is to to read other books make longer sentences and describe maybe more of the feelings imagin yourself as the Mc

3yr