Well done with the quality writing! The story is very interesting and written very well. The descriptions dialogues and the world was written with rich language and delivered smoothly. The MC's character is dynamic and his personality is interesting. Another great thing is that the author has described the plot very well, and the writing does not require knowledge of the series. So practically anyone can pick this up and enjoy the story. My only recommendation is that when he gets the system, it is better to keep the Name, Health, Stamina ..." as one chunk and then introduce the grandmasters then show the menu for the skills. This is just a suggestion. Overall, a great read!
TheDevilYouKnow
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