Review Detail of yokedjaguar in System in Martial Universe

The only thing I guess you could call decent is he used a different novel as the foundation for this fanfic. Everything else is trash, english, grammar, the author being dumb, social interactions, the mc himself. I'm sorry but this is just a waste of time. An example of the author saying something stupid (but first let's find a basement... 10 hours later he found a cave.) Mind you he was in a forest. And let's was tets, plus the mc had no character, he was killed told to pick some wishes did that, bought a bloodline, and then sat in pain for 12 hours. I'm sorry I just cant recommend a fanfic with so many bad things about it.