This kind of thing is better not to writte it, maybe im being an asshole but man this novel really put me in a bad mood, mc is a retard one of the big ones, well is better to say that it feals like the mc has no life, the cheats are garbage, so op but so useles. What make me jump to writte this was actually the fact that woman cant look at the mc withour blushing is like wtf, also red hair and orange eyes vomit. Hope you can think more so that the things you write in the future are coherent. Btw the lv of english is not that bad.
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