Review Detail of GnawingJackal in [DROPPED] Force User Supplementary System

Apart from giving off the vibe that he thinks Jedi are cool the main character has had no character development. He has not so much as expressed admiration for any of the Jedi ideals or any of his mentors. 26 chapters in the MC is a complete stranger. The story needs to be revised to include some opinions the MC has about the people around him. We don;t even get to know if he thinks his efforts are worthwhile or actually being a Jedi in practice is for him or not. Other Jedi follow the Jedi religion. The MC can use his system to get free access to the mysteries of the Force without having to be all humble and good. Other Jedi live humbly and are deeply spiritual. The MC goes around killing all bad guys in his path like a vengeful psychopath. The natural story progression would probably have Mr MC decide to stop being a patient, self-sacrificing Jedi and decide to go at least half Dark in order to live it up with his new magic powers. The Force and a system just don't mesh well.