Meh... It's a subpar SW fic, MC relies waaaay to much on the system. He's literally in the Jedi Temple with knowledge spanning thousands upon thousands of years. Take away the system and he's nothing more than a regular chode. No effort or intiative on the MC's part to improve himself. What did he even do with those 3 years? What are his goals? I dunno man, it's mediocre at best. But who knows, maybe it'll improve in the future? Until then I'm dropping. Best of luck author-san.
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