Review Detail of Kevin711 in Paths Of Power

Hi all, Author here. I would like to welcome you all here to my first Novel and well first making project in writing I've ever undertaken. Even if it's terrible, any self respecting author should give him self a five star rating (he says knowing it's the only 5 star rating he will ever get) To be honest it's making me really nervous but I look forward you your feedback and hope I can give you a fresh and exciting story. If you have any constructive criticism or notice any mistakes (I bet theres plenty) please feel free to comment I'll fix them as soon as I can.