Review Detail of Archwriter in The 4 O' Clock Club

Currently in chapter 7. I have to say this POV exchange is quite interesting. It makes reader curious about what the other character is thinking. The writing quality is great and I can't find any grammatical errors which need to be pointed out. The characters are also introduced amazingly. Its just that I have to check the title of chapter after just reading for a while. For now I have added this one to my library. Good job Author! I hope you'll continue publishing more chapters.