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This story is for emos. People who want to get depressed or just like to see their mc suffer for no other reason than character building. In this case a sort of numb case that follows daddy system sorry AI. The whole ISU shebang doesn't make much sense. Yes, it is there but it doesn't really add something to the story and is more like a new background. I sometimes started skipping and then re-reading until chapter 44 but it is more like a chore then that I get any sense of enjoyment out of it. I really tried but this story is just depressing for the sake of it and later ditches into a different verse.
Alan: Tale of Origin Blood
Greymark
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Agreed. The MC's backstory is nothing but tragedy. An orphan for two lifetimes. A tortured lab-rat. A bloodline that awakens from despair while erasing all good feelings from his memories. And that's just the start. The whole first world ends in failure. The villain wins everything it wants. The MC loses the girl and abandons the few people he cares about as he leaves. After 50 or so chapters of that I can't bring myself to even skim the story for the next world.
the witcher world gets much better... MC will finally find people he can truly care for...I even forget the things that happened in the first world while reading this arc...it gets much better in this world...
Runebane:Agreed. The MC's backstory is nothing but tragedy. An orphan for two lifetimes. A tortured lab-rat. A bloodline that awakens from despair while erasing all good feelings from his memories. And that's just the start. The whole first world ends in failure. The villain wins everything it wants. The MC loses the girl and abandons the few people he cares about as he leaves. After 50 or so chapters of that I can't bring myself to even skim the story for the next world.
Maybe, but who would trust it? Given the author's habit of tossing all kinds of suffering onto the MC, there is no reason not to believe they won't do the same thing when he leaves the current world. The MC had people he cared for in the first world. The author just decided to get rid of them for no real reason. The MC's helper had already told him he would be unable to stay in that world because of his power. His enemy would have had all the same info. That means all that junk wasn't done to drive him away, but instead just to get a few jabs at the MC before he left.
Ruined_Herrscher:the witcher world gets much better... MC will finally find people he can truly care for...I even forget the things that happened in the first world while reading this arc...it gets much better in this world...
that woman doesn't even have any powers in the witcher world...while her civilization seemed powerful in HP universe, it is only as good as the Elder race in the witcher world...MC's bloodline itself is much superior to them...MC will be easily strong enough to face her later...
Runebane:Maybe, but who would trust it? Given the author's habit of tossing all kinds of suffering onto the MC, there is no reason not to believe they won't do the same thing when he leaves the current world. The MC had people he cared for in the first world. The author just decided to get rid of them for no real reason. The MC's helper had already told him he would be unable to stay in that world because of his power. His enemy would have had all the same info. That means all that junk wasn't done to drive him away, but instead just to get a few jabs at the MC before he left.
She is not all-knowing. And all she did was not exactly to drive him away. It was to let him know that there was nothing to come back for, so he will never want to come back. After all, Alan has no knowledge that Minerva did all this, only speculations. She did it all because of fear, and fear can be irrational at times.
Runebane:Maybe, but who would trust it? Given the author's habit of tossing all kinds of suffering onto the MC, there is no reason not to believe they won't do the same thing when he leaves the current world. The MC had people he cared for in the first world. The author just decided to get rid of them for no real reason. The MC's helper had already told him he would be unable to stay in that world because of his power. His enemy would have had all the same info. That means all that junk wasn't done to drive him away, but instead just to get a few jabs at the MC before he left.
She might not be all knowing, but from what we've seen she should know as much or more than the MC's helper. Either way that is like the dumbest excuse ever. He still cares for the people there, even if they won't remember him. This setting practically guarantees any normal person would come back later to check up one them. Which is what you are saying Minerva doesn't want.
Greymark:She is not all-knowing. And all she did was not exactly to drive him away. It was to let him know that there was nothing to come back for, so he will never want to come back. After all, Alan has no knowledge that Minerva did all this, only speculations. She did it all because of fear, and fear can be irrational at times.
Did you read her talk with Amalgal? You are judging her behavior from the viewpoint of humans, but Minerva is not human also, she is not even alive in a genuine sense. She is an AI, just like Amalgal. And she acts like a machine, removing the logical source of everything. She can't kill him. The way she acted is to remove "logical" component. And he really didn't have a reason to go back if we remove feelings and emotions. You dislike her for not understanding human emotions and you are right, she didn't. It is not my excuse, it is her character which is that way. Again, she is not a human, don't judge her with our logic.
Runebane:She might not be all knowing, but from what we've seen she should know as much or more than the MC's helper. Either way that is like the dumbest excuse ever. He still cares for the people there, even if they won't remember him. This setting practically guarantees any normal person would come back later to check up one them. Which is what you are saying Minerva doesn't want.
Actually, if we think abut it deeply, it didn't guarantee anything. Think about it. On one hand we have Fleur and Selena, on the other what Amalgal told him about danger of his return. Fleur will continue to live without memories of him, meaning her life will go according to canon. And she was more or less a bench sitter in all Voldemort stuff. Selena is a grown up battle mage with knowledge he taught her. She doesn't need his care at all. Will you go back to simply sutisfy your egoistical curiosity and endanger the world and their lives with much more dangerous threat than Voldemort or not? In his place I wouldn't go back and leave everything to fate. Even more so when Alan can't take active place in their lives or stay with them, so even for Selena and Fleur it will do more harm than good.
Runebane:She might not be all knowing, but from what we've seen she should know as much or more than the MC's helper. Either way that is like the dumbest excuse ever. He still cares for the people there, even if they won't remember him. This setting practically guarantees any normal person would come back later to check up one them. Which is what you are saying Minerva doesn't want.
Greymark:Actually, if we think abut it deeply, it didn't guarantee anything. Think about it. On one hand we have Fleur and Selena, on the other what Amalgal told him about danger of his return. Fleur will continue to live without memories of him, meaning her life will go according to canon. And she was more or less a bench sitter in all Voldemort stuff. Selena is a grown up battle mage with knowledge he taught her. She doesn't need his care at all. Will you go back to simply sutisfy your egoistical curiosity and endanger the world and their lives with much more dangerous threat than Voldemort or not? In his place I wouldn't go back and leave everything to fate. Even more so when Alan can't take active place in their lives or stay with them, so even for Selena and Fleur it will do more harm than good.