The story is good and the world background is good too.............. But you need some editing to do but nevertheless like 'is' i found a lot of them. Anyway,, it's very promising and I want to read more BL. I hope this one's got more smutty scenes
christin168
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MÖGENThank You Very Much for reading my story! Leave behind such a nice review! I hope this story will be up to you expectation. 😊 Next week, there will have some changes! I ask my dear friend to help me editing it and I will also redo a bit. Hahaha, my reaction when I saw you last sentence... I can't help but laughed and said “Omg”... I can't promise about the smut scene because I never made them and the romance is kinda slow.. But I will try my best to make one of that scene as least 1...
😂😂 To be honest... It never cross my mind to do smut scene and this story is LGBT... So I don't know if the smut scene gonna be BL, GL or hetaro... 😂😂 I hope that, I will not disappointed you with the smut scene probably much later in the story..
Poisonlily:Hahah I'm looking forward to the smut scenes then hahahha doesn't matter if it's actually in the 100+ chapter lol
Hahahahah Don't worry about that. It's fina even if the smut scenes later are BL, GL Shota or Loli ;)
christin168:😂😂 To be honest... It never cross my mind to do smut scene and this story is LGBT... So I don't know if the smut scene gonna be BL, GL or hetaro... 😂😂 I hope that, I will not disappointed you with the smut scene probably much later in the story..
Poisonlily:Hushhh... Don't tell anyone it else they'll think this is a spoiler lol 🤔🧐😜