Review Detail of Nikhil_Chand in The Lost Hero's Advent

So now 22 chapters are released and although it's early but I would like to share my views. Writing quality is good, almost no grammatical error, stable updates, characters are above average(it's just the beginning, so not harsh), world background is getting introduced slowly. Now about the story. When you read(I told this to author too) you will find it awfully similar to some novel(those who have read will know). But I request, do not drop this novel solely on that fact. There are many novels out there whose beginning match so for this I have no complaint. Story progression is good. We have a weak MC but not timid. He is positive towards life and likes to help people. He is good but not naive. He knows how to act smart. Till now he is weakest among all the students or to say heroes transported to new world. But he uses head whether it is training or spar or actual combat. He thinks not only for him but also for his team. So MC is a likeable character. First FML, her character is cliche till now. When MC is weak FML is strong and too OP in most novels. She protects MC against bullies and when there is critical juncture she isn't able to protect MC and loses him. But I guess she will prosper with story. Time needs to be given to her. Bullies, was supposed to be a cliche character, a boring villain who every1 hates. But recently we get to know the backstory so he isn't a villain. So now MC is supposedly dead(yup again cliche) but I am excited coz now the real story will start. Will MC retain his personality or will he become dark? What adventures he will go through? How will he face demons when he doesn't have a combat class? When will he meet his friends back(and probably save them at the last moment)? Time will tell. Godspeed author. Do not disappoint. Many might say that it's cliche( I am one of them too :P). Many might not like but I would say give this novel a little time to develop. If you read it with an open mind then you can see that author has potential to write a good novel. So give him a chance