Review Detail of Chitawulf in Axed

I absolutely love this MC. He's nothing like any other MC I've seen. A lawful Renaissance mafia boss with a popular bar? It's completely unique and refreshing. There are a few grammar and tense mistakes that are noticeable, but don't really get in the way of reading. The plot and world is very interesting, I'm immersed in the history and the whole city of Trent and how society operates in there. I still don't know the main adventure that Zhou is going to undertake - usually around 10 chapters in, the main conflict of the story is already introduced. The whole beginner mission he has isn't really taken as something super important or difficult, so the tension is really low for the first 10 chapters of this novel. Which is fine, but make sure to include something that raises the stakes for Zhou and makes him question his character in order to not bore the reader further down the road! Great job.