Review Detail of Taimmh in Out in the Strange Lands

The is an honest review: I give this story 3.6/5. Let's start the review: The writing was very simple with no variety in sentences. Most sentences used were simple sentences with the same structural building. It also was very plain and missed the factor of exciting readers. At first, the description was fine, but later own the author did it for somethings that I felt where unnecessary; like describing the clothes of her parents that had no significance in the story, and even the MC's clothes. I can't really judge in story development based on the number of publishing chapters that are published now. I also felt that some of the original terminologies were foreign to me and needed some explanation. This is only the start of the Journey!!